Written by: Kelly ThompsonArt by: Leonardo RomeroColors by: Jordie BellaireLetters by: Clayton CowlesCover artwork by: Leonardo Bellaire, Jordie BellaireCover worth: $3.99Release date: December 5, 2023
I am attempting. I am actually attempting with this collection, however Kelly Thompson is making it very troublesome as a result of Birds Of Prey #4 falls brief on so many fundamentals of storytelling. I am unable to recall a comic book collection relying this a lot on occasions that occurred up to now or off-panel whereas executing a plot that makes itself irrelevant by situation #4. Oy!
When final we left the Chicken Of Prey, Dinah’s group made it to Sin with out setting off any alarms. Barda and Cass encountered a supernatural entity named Megaera, who stole Barda’s Mega-Rod. And Ollie briefly held his personal(???) towards Marvel Lady to purchase the group time as soon as alarms began.
Now, the group (together with Harley?) fights their means by means of Amazonian guards nicely sufficient to present hope that escape is feasible, however Marvel Lady exhibits as much as cease everybody’s antics. Barda faces off with Marvel Lady straight, seemingly attempting to kill the hero, however Barda is pressured to elucidate why the BoP invaded the island. Ultimately, the BoP is captured and imprisoned in Themyscira’s model of a jail cell.
Later, Marvel Lady retains Sin by her aspect and discusses the risk with Philippus. They each conclude that Penelope is someway on the coronary heart of the issue, resulting in a confrontation, a battle that ends poorly for Marvel Lady, and a showdown.
“Sounds good. Why so choosy, Mr. Grumpy Reviewer Man?” you would possibly marvel. I am choosy as a result of key plot factors unfold off-panel, the plot development makes little sense, and the final act of this situation nearly fully invalidates the primary three points. Let me clarify.
Sin’s arrival on Themyscira, Penelope’s possession by Megaera, and the way the twain meet are talked about in passing, however you by no means see it, you haven’t any context as to why Penelope brings Sin to Themyscira, and also you by no means see how or why Megaera needs Sin. The inciting incident that makes this mini-series attainable isn’t proven, is not referenced by the Editor’s Notes to different comics, and is not defined with any context on this situation.
Subsequent, the struggle between the BoP, the Amazons, and Marvel Lady is ridiculous. Zealot is ordered to not kill anybody, however she slices and dices her means by means of a crowd in a means that needs to be deadly however is hand-waved away as “non-lethal” slicing and dicing. In Barda’s struggle with Marvel Lady, Barda is both attempting to kill or completely maim Marvel Lady with the strikes she makes use of. You do not pull a Bane/Batman backbreaker, anticipating the end result will simply sting just a little. Additionally, Harley Quinn holding her personal in a brawl towards educated Amazonian fighters continues to be nonsense.
Final and the largest fumble, your complete story shifts as a result of Marvel Lady makes use of her lasso to pressure Barda to elucidate why they’re on the island, which ends up in an investigation and the eventual confrontation towards Megaera. In different phrases, if Dinah had approached Marvel Lady from the start and requested for assist, submitting to the lasso for verification, she would have saved quite a lot of time and prevented quite a lot of accidents. In different phrases, Dinah’s complete plan to assemble a group and invade Themyscira was a boneheaded waste of time.
I do not know if DC did not suppose this story by means of after they accepted it, however the writing execution is simply downright poor.
How’s the artwork? Romero’s character designs are fine-ish, however the non-action scenes are uninteresting, and Jordie Bellaire’s garish shade selections are visually disagreeable.
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Birds Of Prey #4 is a extreme miss in an already troubled mini-series. At its core, the plot is flawed. Too many developments occur off-panel, the inventive selections often do not make sense, and Marvel Lady’s massive revelation makes the primary three points pointless. That is an newbie effort from creators who ought to know higher.
3/10